Thinking of You

Thinking of You

My fingers move slow, some sweet pain in the heart flows

The night here, about to glow

Thinking of You I'm fading did you know?

Thinking of You I'm fading did you know?

Reviews

[mel_central]

Love this, simple but profound.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes Mel, I feel love is well expressed through simplicity. Thanks for visiting friend.

[Pradnya]

Wow , i just loved this one . I read it many times. Thanks for sharing .keep writing

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That's the magic of love. Thanks again friend :)

[kitty]

Re light that fire, let the embers burn!!!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

why not? Pleasure reading your review :)

[Rashi Jain]

So gracefully written 💕 wish it was a little more ☯♥

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

lol you are the second one who is saying a little more. Surely, will add few more lines later. Thanks friend :)

[Shweta]

It's goona be more lovely if u add some more lyrics to it. Nice line it is👌

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

lol glad you like it so much. Thanks friend :)

[kitty]

Emotional piece.Very appealing. Touches the heart. Thanks!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Happy that it touched you. Your most welcome :)

[kitty]

As always. Kitty

[conversations with her ..]

wow, this was simply amazing.

how did you add the video?

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review my poems!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Jada :)
Well in order to add video you simply need to add embed code by right clicking on tne YouTube video and then by copying the embed code. Copy, paste and done.

Off course, i will definitely read your poems friend. Thanks for your visit....

[conversations with her pen..]

thank you so much for showing me this!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome Jada

[AmateurWriter01]

This was short and beautiful. I could almost see this as a chorus line in a song.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks friend. Yes it was a little lyrical at the end.

[BBP]

It's got a rythmic song quality here. I liked it.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks BBP :)

[butterfly]

Beautiful work!Twilight is one of my favorite stories, this is good work.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Butterfly 🦋 even i like the twilight story very much.