14th Feb

14th Feb

I don't want to be the cover page of your heart.
I want to be the whole story that will last long.

Can you admit that?

Author's Note

Can you admit that?

Reviews

[Marie]

I know you don't want to be the cover page of the story of you and your beloved, but I speak of a different cover, two covers in fact. These are the front and back hard covers within which the book is contained. Being the front and back covers means you would be protecting your love story so it lasted a very long time, like a real book does. Without these covers the pages within are very vulnerable to wear and tear, to many different kinds of damage too. You didn't see what I meant, Sky. I thought it was me, but it was actually you! So, the whole story is protected by both the covers, back and front, in a book and in real life you and she together are the story (the whole book) and the covers protects that story, though I know you don't want to be the covers, just the book. Right? Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Marie for your reviewing again. In very simple terms. I dont want a love for a one night stand. I want a love to spent all my nights with only her. I want to be the whole story that will last long.

[Marie]

Yes, I understand that, Sky. But you will need to be protective of that love as in spending time together, kissing her Good morning as soon as you both wake up, let her know you think about her when you're not together, tell her how very much you love her, etc, etc, etc,... Those are the hard backed covers which will ensure that the whole story lasts a very long time and hopefully forever, Sky...

[Onlyme]

Aw, this is simply beautiful. Few words but so meaningful romantic and true. Heartfelt, passionate and lovely.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Love is all heartfelt, passionate and lovely. Love to be in love!!

[Onlyme]

Exactly Sky. I do agree.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Dawn

[Onlyme]

Take care sweetheart. A be kind to you.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You too. Take care. Blessings for you!

[Onlyme]

And right back at you also :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. You are right. Love should be 7/24 and always. Perfect thoughts for the emotions of love. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Glad you like it my friend. Thank you very much!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[Lauren]

I love how short this is, yet it has such a strong impact. It almost tells of a love story that has hit its hard times. The last sentence as well simply sums it up and I can see the expression a person would have on their face when asking that. Awesome work!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks L.K.B :)

[kitty]

So endearing! Love's compelling statement! Like it very much!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks kitty :) Very happy that you like it...

[kitty]

My pleasure!