The Other Me

The Other Me

A Poem by skyelight

Sally was a dancer,

Emma was "exotic",

Amy was a singer,

Megan was "erotic",

Daina was a girl,

Stacey was a boy,

Tanner liked 'em both,

and Zieda liked her toys.

 

What about me?

Maybe you are asking.

What a silly question...

 

I already told you about me.

© 2013 skyelight


Author's Note

skyelight
This was something I wrote in my psychology class. We ere learning about split-personality disorder and this randomly popped up in my head...

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Good. I got it right away. Nice twist on ending. I love that
Timb

Posted 11 Years Ago


skyelight

11 Years Ago

thanks glad ya liked it! :)
We all have different sides of ourselves, and sometimes these sides express themselves so eloquently and uniquely that they might as well be someone else.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

11 Years Ago

Amen to that :)
I liked the twist at the end.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

11 Years Ago

haha so did I ;)
But I promise I'm not this bonkers... weeeell maybe just a little sometimes :.. read more
That's a lot of split personalities! But very fun to read and great rhythm! The end really gets you wondering!

Posted 11 Years Ago


skyelight

11 Years Ago

haha story of my life ;) jk glad you liked it!
Wow, this is reallly good:) It definately goes along with the split personality disorder and it sounds like a very troubled person to me... It's really good work though:) Great job:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elizabeth Porterfield

11 Years Ago

Your welcome, and I can see how that would happen:) I love it:)
skyelight

11 Years Ago

aww youre too sweet ;)
Elizabeth Porterfield

11 Years Ago

Hahaha, not all the time, but thanks:)
i love it :) it was amazing truly

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

11 Years Ago

aww thanks :) appreciate it!
Alina-Sofia

11 Years Ago

you welcome
this is really really awesome! I love the last line :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

11 Years Ago

:) thanks I thought it would give it a bit of a twist don't ya think?
Lucy Morningstar ♥

11 Years Ago

very much so, yes :)
interesting to read
so many you's are out today...Megan sounds like fun and Stacey the boy also
heck they all sound great
very creative
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skyelight

11 Years Ago

thanks:) I was hoping you'd like it!

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skyelight
skyelight

Glendale :), AZ



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I am 16 years old and I love to write/read(obviously). I play volleyball , soccer, and cheer. I like cooking, drawing, dancing, and just about anything adventure-like and artistic. My plans for the fu.. more..

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