The thought of you.

The thought of you.

A Story by tranquil_sky

The thought of you frightens me.

It makes every single bone in my body quiver with fear.

But maybe it isn’t you- maybe it’s the thought of seeing you again. The dread of possibly falling in love with your deep green eyes or the way you tousle your hair across your forehead.

Maybe it’s the way you speak; the way your lips softly caress each word that falls from your tongue.

I fear your touch, in the form of a casual handshake or a friendly hug, for every touch sends fireworks in my heart- with both pain and the wonder.

Your presence makes me weak and that is why I am afraid.

I despair the thought of letting myself fall for you once again, because the first time nearly killed me and my pathetically patched heart.

© 2016 tranquil_sky


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Lovely!!!

A conflict between two parts of a heart, one wants to love but the other part reminds it of the past pain that the whole heart went through... I can feel the confusion and fear in this write... Our broken hearts acts the same way, it craves love yet it fears to get broken again so it tries to stay away and hidden inside it's shell... Such a nice and honest way you have presented the feelings of once broken heart...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tranquil_sky

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much



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You've really told it how it is. Heartbreak is one of the great pains on the Earth, yet the heart keeps yearning for the one who hurt it so. Very well-written story you have here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tranquil_sky

8 Years Ago

I really appreciate it x
wow..its really touching..i liked it...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tranquil_sky

8 Years Ago

Thank you x
fearing the inevitable is something we all do from time to time, it's a simple case of the can't help it. Great writing that is revealing honesty.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tranquil_sky

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much x
Fear and disappointment. Defenses we do need. Better to be safe and sorry.
"I despair the thought of letting myself fall for you once again, because the first time nearly killed me and my pathetically patched heart."
I understand the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tranquil_sky

8 Years Ago

I really appreciate your review x
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Lovely!!!

A conflict between two parts of a heart, one wants to love but the other part reminds it of the past pain that the whole heart went through... I can feel the confusion and fear in this write... Our broken hearts acts the same way, it craves love yet it fears to get broken again so it tries to stay away and hidden inside it's shell... Such a nice and honest way you have presented the feelings of once broken heart...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tranquil_sky

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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Added on August 25, 2016
Last Updated on August 25, 2016
Tags: love, pain, scared, romance, teen, story

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tranquil_sky
tranquil_sky

nelspruit, South Africa



About
hi everybody, I'm an 18 year old living in South Africa. I'm very laid back. Music and writing are my escapes. I would really appreciate your thoughts on my pieces. :) more..

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