Cheating.

One lie to question all truths.

Cheating is not a mistake.

If you truly care about someone,
you will not be able to kiss
someone else without tasting
your loved ones tears on their lips.

You will not be able to take your
clothes off for someone else without
feeling like a field ripped bare to its soil.

Cheating is a choice,

it's a choice you made because you
obviously didn't give a single f**k
about your relationship.

Reviews

[Usman Muhammad]

This is an impressive write!
Most important thing is the way you give your message...It's concise and to the point.
But that doesn't means you should not write lengthy stories....Give them a try too.
Your message is very deep and thought provoking....I will be amazed to see these messages woven in a story.
Well done Tranquil and keep writing.

[tranquil_sky]

Thank you so much for the review, look at my other stories , some of them are longer x

[Usman Muhammad]

I will check them out soon.

[D]

Heh... The pain and sorrow the victim feels when he/she becomes less important, and someone else takes that special place...

Well penned.

[samparks,sam]

I see so crazy about in your writing keep it continue, well doing

[tranquil_sky]

I really appreciate i

[tranquil_sky]

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[Hanin]

That really is well written. Wise words.

[tranquil_sky]

thank you so much

[Soma-ko]

Very nicely done, I probably would've never thought of this. I feel like you could format this to a poem if you wanted to, but in any case, well written!

Short example without rewording:

Cheating is not a mistake.

If you truly care about someone,
you will not be able to kiss
someone else without tasting
your loved ones tears on their lips.

You will not be able to take your
clothes off for someone else without
feeling like a field ripped bare to its soil.

Cheating is a choice,

it's a choice you made because you
obviously didn't give a single f**k
about your relationship.

[tranquil_sky]

I'm not a huge fan of poetry so I never even thought of that but I love it, thank you so much xx

[Soma-ko]

No problem! There are things you can tweak, but I just wanted to show you it's definitely doable :D

[Gee]

Cheating is only cheating when caught, as a good friend of mine has discovered. An anonymous letter to his wife now 20 years of love and trust are in the hands of a counsellor. I like your descriptions, bang on. Well done that lady, take a bow, curtsy, or whatever takes your fancy

[tranquil_sky]

I really appreciate it x

[Gee]

Nae problem

[Yesenia Sanchez]

You described cheating in a way i could only imagine to write it down. very well said and whoever hurt you truly doesn't know the damage they've done. keep writing your words were beautifully written down. Please check out mine!

[tranquil_sky]

Thank you so much for the compliment it means the world to me xx

[JMaster1]

so true , you put it so well here

[tranquil_sky]

thank you so much