Broken

Make it stronger than before..

Love has come to my heart

I became selfish at the very start

Too much happiness felt

I let my Friends heart melt

I was blinded by that shining light

So I followed it day and night

I didn't notice that I left behind

A diamond so strong and kind

Why was it broken?

A question that left my mind open

The chain that binds us for years together

Can it not be repaired forever?

As I was reminiscing the past

Memories filling up, and I know what to do at last

Friendship never ends

As long as you Trust your Best Friends

Never forget the times they are there

Enduring all the happiness and pain you bear

I'm sorry for the things I've done

Can our souls start again as one?

Author's Note

I know its my fault why it happened..and I'm really sorry about it..

Reviews

[mackieboy]

that's sad.
it was a nice sad poem.
and reading it was nice too.
nice reading you :)

[$êlvån]

you hav expressed nyc amount of fell in the poem......gud job..1 suggestion I would like to give to you is dont try to make rhyming words because wat I personally feel is it may decrease the real intensity weith few others set of words...poetry is above words.......sitll a gr8 work....keep it up......

[dan nacario]

the sadness in this poem is evident ..

[BLACK PRINCE]

THIS IS DEEP.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Very nice. You have realised like anything. There is a good answer from your poem itself. Yes friendship is ever living heaven in the earth. Your writing is so touching. With regards my friend.

[Kuhr Gred]

Full of questions , but full of answers.. i like it.. the way you express your thought.. sometimes it is hard.. but do you think it is a way to move on :) hahah.. just an advice from a friend...
- Kuhr Gred

[tk]

Aww. that's a really sad one.
i can feel mixed emotions while reading this: happiness at the start, then pain, reminisces, and hoping for a fresh new start. overall, the feel of this piece is truly heartfelt.
"I'm sorry for the things I've done
Can our souls start again as one?" loved these lines. :)) a very catching ending.
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