Destiny Cards

"Giving up is never an option for my love for you" "I'll play all my cards just to win you!"~

I will never give up

Even if I face the hardest trump

I'll hold on to what I believe

These feelings that I cannot just leave

No matter how your mood swings

I can handle everything

Whether your confused or angry

I'll take in all your fury

Pain is my choice

For you to hear my voice

I know it will reach you

Cause your heart will feel it too

I will always wait

Until Love lead us together on our fate

The path that you will make

Side by side we will take

Reviews

[Jed Sabffle]

another great poem! :D
Especially the last stanza.... it is really captivating!
"I will always wait
Until Love lead us together on our fate
The path that you will make
Side by side we will take"

I can put myself into this! :D
Two thumbs up! Keep writing!

[Kuhr Gred]

:) I surprise when I saw you in review of dan nacario! but anyway!
Brianna Sy, I like your poem .. your feeling , the flow of words really fantastic...
the last stanza captivate my attention.. :) Keep it up :) GREAT WRITE!!
- Kuhr Gred :)

[$êlvån]

Into my library:)

[$êlvån]

This one is just just too sweet..its lyk just written 4 me.believe me i can really relate this one with my situation..keep the job up and once more tanx 4 sharing..perfect one.i rated 100/100

[Thea]

Wow...Simple rhyme scheme...This is a nice poem...I enjoyed reading this so much...
Keep it up, Brianna!
:)))