Truth Behind the Lies

"Feelings that i can't let you feel."

I want to cry

But I just can't try

No matter how it hurts

I can't ignore it like dirt

I know it's foolish to act like this

Maybe unfair if I told you the tease

Hurt will be what you feel

If I reveal to you the real deal

But because I love you so much

II will forget all the catch

Leave it in the midst of the rain

And Forever lose the pain

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

The force behind the words would not be more clear unless a hammer slammed across the readers knee. It was very pure and emotional with out the need for force in a lot of work that is read.

[Kuhr Gred]

wow.. every stanza has a rhythm.. it is really great.. i can't say any comment.. because I'm really amaze :) GREAT WRITE!! keep it up :)
- Kuhr Gred

[$êlvån]

Thanks 4 it..loved it ..full use of words:)

[Jed Sabffle]

nice poem!! :)
i really loved it!
Emotions are well-conveyed. you used very clear words to express them..
Great write! Keep it up! :D

[Thea]

Wow! A really nice poem, "Brianna"...The emotions are very well-expressed in every stanza...Sometimes, it's just so difficult to show how we truly feel for someone! Greatly told in such words! 100!
:)))