Untitled (so far)
A Book by Brandon Lindström
Excerpt from the first page of a book I am currently writing inspired by J. Conrad's Heart of Darkness and my good friend J.S. Davidson's novel in progress.
© 2015 Brandon Lindström
Author's Note
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Tell me how interested you are in the story so far. Is it readable? Does there need to be simpler dialogue to appeal to a broader audience, or do you think the words are very descriptive and sound nice? This is the beginning, so I want it to be extremely hooking and interesting.
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Author
Brandon LindströmSeattle, WA
About
Just a young author looking for a place to post his works and receive critique. more..
Writing
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