Loss

Loss of mind
All sense of self respect
Spending the time
Living in regret

Watching the days
Pass by without thought
Time goes by
You stare at the clock

The day is old
No longer new
Loss of feelings
Good and bad
Passing the time
That you wish you had
It was all stolen
No longer yours

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

I liked your theme but presented in poetic prose it did not flow smoothly read aloud
i think perhaps you should try it in metered verse to gain the full effect