Hello Goodbye.

Hello honey 

hello and hi 

hello today 

but tomorrow goodbye

Goodbye sweetie 

goodbye and good day

goodbye to all that 

and all those things I'd still say 

Hello goodbye

well we finally meet

as I'm slipping away 

to me you have come to greet 

Goodbye hello  

from beginning to end 

at death you welcomed me 

as my astral friend

Now through there is my judgement

and penance on trial 

and given my life on earth

I'll be in there for a while.

XD

Reviews

[R.E.K.]

This is beautiful. Seems to speak of the light of life and the sorrow of seeing it slip away.

[Skib]

Thank you R.E.K, your input is valuable to me. Life is indeed fleeting and that was all I was trying to portray. Thanks again for reading and reviewing this piece :).

[Relic]

I could be wrong but this sounds like suicide. And that would be a problem on judgement day for sure. :)

[Skib]

Which would be terribly disconcerting for those who hold a belief :p. Thanks for reading.