The One I Call Thee

devised on the spot so forgive me if it's overbearing :)

Those unrelenting whispers

of which I can bare no more

forever sneering

"I'm better than you i'm sure!"

However you are but a person 

of organs and of blood

one step away from becoming

one of those filthy pigs in mud

Suffer not sweet child

for redemption is on it's way 

time for one last atonement

for you shall pay this day

...And do not feel elated

for redemption is bittersweet 

as you reap what you sow 

you simultaneously sow what you reap

I have never been one for arrogance 

and today will see that be

however there is none more insignificant 

than the one that I call Thee

Reviews

[Haseo]

very good poem, I loved the rhyme that you tried to carry on here.

"however there is none more insignificant

than the one that I call Thee"

JUST WOW, these Two lines are Perfect
couldn't write them better

[Skib]

Thank you for reading and for all of your kind words :) it really means a lot to me. i can't wait to read some of your work