Babble

I wrote this when I was tired, in an attempt to ward off writers block lol I will leave it for you to decide if it worked... :p

Once upon a time

in a far away land 

sat a man at a desk

with a pen in his hand 

he put it to paper 

with intentions to write 

once he'd adjusted his cartridge

he set off on his plight

He wrote of dragons and warlords

and witches and thieves 

but none of those characters

were greater than he 

his power was fearsome 

revered through the deserts sand 

and all because 

of this pen in his hand

Next he conjured

an extremely fast ship 

which he declared to be named

the golden tip

as it was made of precious metal

and spiked with poisoned barbs 

the fastest in the waters 

especially on mars

He took them there too you know 

above even the thinnest layers of air

the witch the warlord

dragon and thieves 

and they are probably still there... 

 

Reviews

[Haseo]

he is the God of his imagination, non can transcend his space
I loved it a lot
but you should add a few drama between all these types, Dragon and warlord, witches and thieves.
he tried to write about them but yet, we have np clue what is the story here, you should write about these character killing him or he is playing them with his imagination, because he is the god of his pen and the papers.

keep it up

[Skib]

Thank you so much, i could have went on forever with this piece and had i delved into each character it would have been overbearing

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Loved it. It's like saying what the poet write about most if the time sitting there. Story tales to tell little kids. Good job :)

[Skib]

thank you :) i was bored but wanted to write and this was the end product :p

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

It was a nice piece. Your very welcome :)

[Skib]

:) x I am glad you enjoyed the read

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

You're a good poetry writer so of course I would :)

[Skib]

thanks again, it really is appreciated :)

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome :)

[Papaya]

Great poem. Nice job.

[Skib]

Thank you gentle breeze for blowing some nice words my way :)

[West Lake Angel]

I love, love, love this! I imagined a man sitting with a child reading this poem to them. It makes my heart happy.

[Skib]

Hey Elizabeth thank you so much, you have made my heart happy with such a lovely review :)

[Brandon Shae]

Splendid write, Sir Gary. I like how you drift into fantasy.

[Skib]

Hey Brandon, thanks a lot :) I am into escapism and nonsense so I am glad it showed in this particular piece. If you liked it and you have the time, then could I suggest you read Chapter 1 (Ben) It is not much at the moment but for what I have planned it should be a good one.

Thanks again for your kind review :)

Best wishes

Skib(Gary)