It's Not

It’s not what I wanted to hear 
It’s not who I wanted to hurt 
It’s not where I wanted to be at 
It’s not home 

I would give you my heart 
I would hold you and your hand 
I would never destroy your happiness 
I would love you until the end 

Don’t tell me it’s just a habit 
Don’t just met me halfway 
Don’t ever hide 
Don’t say you going to leave 

I love it when we are hugging 
I love wearing your hoodies 
I love how you hesitate 
I love you 

Let’s be each other’s’ heroes 
Let’s make history 
Let’s stay together 
Let’s be the one 

Always be honest 
Always call me your babe 
Always be there 

Never give up hope 
Never give up on us 
Never forget what we have

Author's Note

Tell me what you think :)

Reviews

[Gary H]

I think the idea is good but you could go further. However, it's your words and what you create. I would use each first or first two words to end a stanza so you would have for example,

Always be honest
Always call me your babe
Always be there
Always.

Never give up hope
Never give up on us
Never forget what we have
Never.

The punctuation is also important to make the words really come off the page as you read them. The full stop at the end gives a finality to each part.

[skiayly]

Thank you that's really good advise I'll make sure to remember that.

[Ban Heo]

I feel like powerful things can be done with repetition, but it needs to be with a difference and I feel like it's a bit too heavy here.

[skiayly]

Thank you for commenting. I understand what you are saying