Breeze

Haiku :)

Fearsome wind, blowing
Laced with melodic bird cries
Embraces gaily

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Caitlynxoxo]

Loved this! So true, as well. the description was wonderful; short and sweet, just like all haikus should be! :) Thanks for sharing!!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[N. Scott Cohen]

Effective use of the Haiku, but what is being embraced? Is the wind embracing the birds or are the birds embracing the wind?