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A Poem by Stephanie S

  I miss you when I smile, I miss u when I cry, 

I think that I shall miss you, until the day I die. 

I miss your sweet kisses, 

And the warmth you made me feel, 

I miss how u made my happiness, always feel so real. 

I miss you when im lonely, and I miss you when im sad, 

I miss you on my good days, 

And the gloomy and the bad. 

I miss your arms around me, and how u held me near, 

I miss the way u made me feel, 

that there was nothing left to fear. 

I miss your lips, eyes, taste and touch, 

Everything about u, I cant help but miss so much. 

I miss laying next to you and the closeness that I felt, 

I miss how when you looked at me, 

The way my heart would melt. 

I miss the way u teased me and tried to make me mad, 

I miss how always knew, how to chase away the bad. 

I miss the way you loved me, 

The way you did it so tenderly, 

I miss how we got along, 

Everything went so perfectly. 

I miss you at this moment, and ill miss you in an hour, 

I miss when times were sweet and even when they were sour. 

I miss everything about you and about the way we were, 

I miss everything so much that its turning into a blur, 

And as for me now, theres nothing left to say, 

except the one thing Ill never miss, 

Is that one day, u decided to go away. I

© 2008 Stephanie S


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nice loving words...sorrowful..one thing i would have done is not use sweet angel so much throughout the write, i would use it less for more effect the lines can stand alone without them with the same feeling expressed i feel. thank you for this read. peace to you~john

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Stephanie S
Stephanie S

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"I want to feel passion, i want to feel pain, i want to weep at the sound of your name....come make me laugh, come make me cry,,,just make me feel alive!" i find myself writing from time to time, an.. more..

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