Who are you?

to judge me?

and

Who are you!

to think

that

you are above me ?

 

how can you think

that you are better than me

or anyone else?

I think you should

seriously question

your own mental health!

and

Ranting and raving

you continue to preach!

And who exactly is it?

that you think

you are saving with your speech?!

And what makes you think

that your perfection

is so damn renowned?

that you can

look down on me

and

frown on me

and

put me down!

and as you repripmand me

from your delusional haze

Why should I listen

to anything that you have to say?

as you carry on living your own

corrupt and jaded ways!

 

and

what makes you think

you can so

degradingly

point out

all of my obvious

impurities

As you try so hard

to mask

all of

your own insecurities?

And as you lecture me

and tell me about

all the wrongs that i live

Can you truly validate why

I should adhere

and listen

to any of these lessons

that

you so righteously give?

 

And why

would I 

EVER

want to be like you?

As I watch in disgust

At all of your biased

and unjust views

And I

see

all of the

condescending,

condemning,

and belittling that you do!

So maybe first

you should re- examine and critique

all of the wrongs about yourself

Before you go around

Casting judgement

and ridiculing

the lives

of everyone else!

 

-Who are you,

Reviews

[INSURGENT*76]

have you ever wondered why the bottoms of your feet are called souls �

i think maybe its because they carry us to the places where we become who we are ?

i like your poem :/

[Deborah Shepard]

rage intrigue , drama loved it

[Poeticpiers]

easy to see the mote in your neghbbours eye and miss the beam in your own.But do I detect a little self righteousness in you rant. Are you not judging also