forgive me

 

 

 

- Baby,

I'm sorry

- so sorry,

for what I've done wrong

And I hope you know

That to my heart

You will forever belong

And I would do anything

to fix this mess

Endless apologies

I would forever confess

I would do anything

to mend all these pieces

Find the right way

to smooth out these creases

I would search forever

For the right words to say

give all that I have

to find the right way

I would sew it back together

with unbreakable thread

and figure out how

to take back

all those hurtful words

that I had said.

 

I would bathe for hours

To cleanse all my sins

Pray

That you might

still be able

to see some good within.

 

and I would do anything

to somehow find a cure

to make you believe

I am still good and pure

And I would try somehow

To make you see

That you are all

In this world

that there is for me

 

But I realize now

There is nothing

That I can possibly do

To change your tainted

Tattered views

This is all in your hands

it is now up to you.

 

and so

patiently I must await

to learn my hearts

pressing fate

and as I

hope to avoid the gallows noose

as i beg

please from your life 

 don’t cut me loose

and as you bestow your verdict

upon me

please

I plead

try to find a way

to let us be

and please

I implore

Don’t shut this door

Please find a way

to forgive my crimes

And know

i will prove my

 innocence

to you again

 over time

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Serendipity]

Wow, this is amazing.

Thank you, I have been looking for the words to express how I'm feeling. It touched his heart and brought a tear to his eyes. Maybe this will help him see how truly sorry I am for the pain I have caused.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I love it, I hope he forgive you, Have you been that bad ? :) Yossi

[Trée]

Oh my. This poem begs to be read aloud. The words alone are shadows and I want to see, to hear the object that can cast such pain and pathos and longing. In other words, if you ever do audio, please post. I feel like I'm reading the lyrics of a song and I want to hear it.

[Sarah]

This is a lovely poem, begging the forgiveness of someone who means a lot to us. (: It shows that everyone deserves to be forgiven, and given a second chance. ^_^ Great job!