Poisoned Air

Poisoned Air

A Poem by sk8tagirl95

You're suffercating

Your lungs are slowly dying

Filled with poisoned air

© 2008 sk8tagirl95


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Nice image...

One small correction, however. It's "suffocating" not "suffercating". Make that correction and you're looking great.

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Good words and description. Thanx! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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 Added on June 27, 2008
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sk8tagirl95
sk8tagirl95

Cape Town, South Africa



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Hey, how are ya doing??? Im 13 and live in Cape Town with my parents. I love life and my quote for the day is: "Love doesn't make the world go roung but it makes the ride worth while." more..

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