A penny for your thoughts

Sometimes I sit around all day,

wondering,

what the world looks like from your eyes.

If the sea is shimmery blue

with the waves licking the sand.

If the mountains are grassy green

and the trees dancing in the wind.

If the sun is as bright

like a childs face when receiving a gift.

Do you see all this?

Or do you see more?

Author's Note

sowhat do ya think...im not sure i know

Reviews

[Stella]

This is such a beautiful poem. I can picture the scenes in my mind. You used good descriptive words to create a beautiful image. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work! :)

[Jessica Fox]

It is nicely put together and has wonderful images

[Nassira]

It is a nice one:) Your poem is nicely put together and makes a lot of sense! It is simple ... yet profound...
Great write here! I like it very much:)

Salam to you :)

[Lady Lazarus.]

I adore it....
very good use of words and great idea.
good work
xxx