A Clouds View

How cloud sees the world

The world is sometimes a battlefield,

amazing yet sad.

It makes you wonder what's the point,

why it's sometimes bad.

 

The world can be a gentle place,

when the moon comes out at night.

And the sun shining in the day,

with that bright beautiful light.

 

Author's Note

what do ya think...i think it needs more...

Reviews

[ABBY]

its really good. just becuase its short doesnt mean its bad or its not good anof for the world. great job

[Str8jacket]

I think it's good how it is but, if you really want to extend it, you could try to incorporate the title into the poem somehow. Anyway, it's just a suggestion. Can't wait to see what else you put up. Keep writing and welcome to Writerscafe :)