Loved these lines.. "there's only one flame,
one path, one match"
Beautiful poem. It reminds me `bout the raged temptations of love which`s, of course, a flame having one path (which`s reaching to heart) and one match (giving a pleasure to soul). Excellent poem!
there's only one flame,
one path, one match,
That will allow you to burn yourself,
melt away, and feel warmth.
~~~ So touchable lines ~~~
Yeah, this`s a great free verse write but there`s so much glory of life`s hidden behind the words. Every line`s speaking up to me something about revealing the thoughts ~~~ the creations of life with words ~~~ through muses over the oceans ~~ I enjoyed reading this thoughtful piece!
Hi!
There's a mellow tone surrounding like a warm aura in your piece that it almost feels like I am sitting very near to a lighted candlestick, and all the emotions and sentiments just come rushing into my head. It has all its colors. However, I am a bit confused about the transition of objects within the stanzas. For one time, it is very lucid that you are using the candle/candle flame as a metaphor, and then it shifts to another object which is love/love experience. Although, I really get the whole picture, and am amazed by it.
Thank you for sharing!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
The candle is suppose to be a symbol of how love is a blessing and a curse, but it's worth the burn... read moreThe candle is suppose to be a symbol of how love is a blessing and a curse, but it's worth the burn. I changed the confusing transitions to kind of keep the mystery of what it could be about. Thanks for reading!