Some real nice moments of love`re well captured in this marvelous piece. I like the title either. Good to read your insights through the poem of hearts.
No leaf has a name
no purpose, no reason
but to be a leaf so tame ...
Beautiful lines! I like the beautiful words you always use to paste your thoughts with beauty's. Yeah, the comparison of life with a leaf's a pretty amazing thing ever to read so, am pleased to read this amazing poem in your words. Keep on!
A few technical comments first. I believe you want the word "vein" and not "vain" and in the last stanza a slave to the its season...I think the word "the" doesn't belong. Now for the interest...I enjoyed the poem and think you captured the essence of a leaf. Makes me want to stop and look at them again...all of them.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you, I just realized I copy and pasted my draft instead of the final copy
You gave life and purpose to the leave. I believe the trees are alive and we need them more than they need us. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I appreciate all the comments, I'm glad you enjoy my writing!