Intrinsic vs. Extrinsic Senryu

I vacillate between these often...

 

 

Meager speck of sand?

 

Center of the universe?

 

Which describes my life?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[amrit]

Wow !u got it right ,about oscillating in between . The balance,the equilibrium , these intriguing lines are something to think about for hours, an introspection stuff ... i enjoyed this.

[Steve L.]

My viewpoint can change on an hourly basis. Thank you!

[Terpsichore]

The acceptance of how tiny we are comes through so clearly in these lines; but it is that innate ability to understand this, that makes us more than simply a speck of sand.

T

[Steve L.]

Very well stated!! Thank you for the review.

[Matching Socks]

Wow, nice job. I don't know which to pick either. :)

[Steve L.]

True!! Mine can change by the hour :)

[MsJewel]

I enjoyed this thought provoking little gem!

:) Julie

[Steve L.]

I am very happy that you enjoyed this! Thank you!

[MsJewel]

My pleasure Steve :)

[AprilRN1210]

I like when you dig deep Steve.. I think we have all often wondered the same thing a time or two. I love the way you phrased this... well done my friend..

[Steve L.]

I really appreciate it, April. Thank you.

[Lydia Shutter]

Interesting introspection here.....where do we stand in the universe? Everyone has asked that question at one time or another. Lydi*

[Steve L.]

Definitely...I guess it depend on your outlook...

[Lyn Anderson]

Very interesting indeed. I like the font usage as well, highlighting the vacillation.

[Steve L.]

Thank you! Using different fonts is definitely not my strong suit...