Breathe

Breathe

A Poem by Steve L.
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The magic and power of breathing...

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Inhale & Exhale: Simple, right?

A breath can be your first on this earth post-partum…That innate action, feeling the air flow down your throat into those two delicate organs…

In stark contrast, a breath can be your swan song…the last processing of oxygen amongst the millions that treaded this world before it…

A breath can be mind-blowingly exhilarating…after days of traversing K2, you arrive at the peak…take a look at the grandeur before you…at the altar of existence…you will never have a breath like that again…

A breath can occur hundreds of feet under water in a foreign land…this simple process takes on a new and sobering importance…breath needs to be manufactured in this aquatic world…your entire existence on this planet is in the hands of a tank and breathing apparatus…just hope that your gear and equipment were not made in China!

A breath can be sensual, transcending, intimate…Making love to your partner…an unexplainable connection…eyes peer into each other’s souls…each thrust feels like a new and exciting journey…your breath becomes his/her breath…breathing unites and becomes one organism…magical…

A breath can flood your body with tranquility and excavate tension and negativity…it can take your mind to higher planes of thought…to unexplored worlds…

A breath can be the most valuable thing on this planet…but also taken for granted on a second by second basis…it is rewarding but can take life in a millisecond…

Each breath you take in your lifetime is unique…Each happens in a different moment in time…thoughts change between each…circumstances change between each…molecules and atoms change between each…each breath is….a life and world unto itself.

Pretty simple and straightforward stuff, huh…

 

© 2014 Steve L.


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Simple and straight forward, indeed. I will say, though that you describe simplicity quite indepth and give it beauty and personality. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steve L.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review!
It's amazing how there are a set, diverse number of breaths that each person will take in their lifetime. This is very thoughtful and stimulates the mind successfully.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steve L.

10 Years Ago

thank you! breathing has come to the forefront of my mind after starting deep-breathing and mindfuln.. read more
Very insightful. Really makes you ponder. Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steve L.

10 Years Ago

Thank you! The things that appear to be "simple" have a lot more layers to them.
Lyan

10 Years Ago

Yea very true indeed. We really don't realize that fact until we are faced with reading such a piece.. read more

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Added on July 23, 2014
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Tags: breath, mindful, existential, romance, love

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