Hidden Thoughts

Hidden Thoughts

A Poem by Steve L.
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99% of our thoughts will never reach the surface...

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Thoughts lurk deep ocean...

Stay hidden some will surface...

Words reveal as waves.

© 2014 Steve L.


Author's Note

Steve L.
What if we had no filters?

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If we had no filters....that could be really bad...especially if I was till around. :P I have a lot to say to a few people and they probably wouldn't like it. Plus I have a very sick and twisted sense of humor, which doesn't always go over so well. I've had to learn the concept of a filter...and I don't have much of one as it is. :D Very well done. Loved this piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steve L.

10 Years Ago

Thank you!! Filters suck!!
Oh, if we had no filters, there would certainly be more arguments in this world. Just because we think something does not mean we should put our voice to the thought. Some things are better left unsaid, no doubt of that. The mind is like a deep ocean and when it's ebb tide, well, what is left on the shore is what we hear from others. You have said so much in three short lines. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steve L.

10 Years Ago

Thank you!! Filters are definitely needed!!

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Added on July 22, 2014
Last Updated on July 22, 2014
Tags: thoughts, hidden feelings, feelings, musings

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