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A Poem by C.B.

I am so much more
Than what you give me credit for.

I'm beautiful without being perfect,
I'm intelligent without being arrogant.
I'm confident without being proud
But most of all,
I'm more than you'll ever know.

Because you left because I'm not a super model
And also because I'm not a genius
And because i don't have the highest self esteem.
But most of all,
You don't know how great I am.

But I hope that she's everything
That you said she was.
I hope she's prude like I'm not.
I hope she's emotional like I'm not.
I hope she's unrealistic like I'm not.
I hope she's everything that I'm not.

Because, he is so much more
Than I ever gave him credit for.

© 2009 C.B.


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Not many people could get away with this subject, it might seem overdone or self indulgent or whatever, but hey, guess what, I think you're really talented, and have a unique style that is effortless and really human. You're not someone pretending to be a writer. Your stuff is refreshing and a joy to read, and I love how it always 'comes together' at the end.

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My name is Caroline, and I've been writing for about 10 years. I mainly focus on horror, but when I write it really depends on my mood. I'm not an angry or dark person, but I have thoughts which need .. more..

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