CH2

I stepped into the arched grand hallway, the beautiful marble  floor was polished and brand new, a magnificent staircase with gold rimmed handles led to the second floor, I noticed that the first floor of the house was used for a garage, oh but only the step-loser would think of that. We all walked steadily up to the second floor, it had four bedrooms but I knew mum was gonna transform the spare bedroom into a ‘gym’ for her to work out, I know Mel will enjoy that, so all that ‘weight’ that she put on this summer can all disappear. Mel dibs the bedroom to the left and mum  and the step loser took the middle bedroom  and I took the bedroom to the right which had a creepy view of the house next door, well to me it didn’t look like a house, it was sort of like a run down barn/shed or something like that. Great. I spent the rest of the day in the wooden spa, Mel looked at me and gave me the stank eye, I told her she was welcome to join me. We set up the outdoors table for us to eat breakfast on every morning, to me it seemed pointless, but  what can I say, I love living the life, especially when it comes with designer shoes, clothes, hats, and sunnies.

 

Obviously anyone with a brain would kill for a life like this so that’s why I’m thankful its just the people around. As the smouldering sunset came to an end, I sat miserably on my bed.I was scared, scared to face the horrers of high school AGAIN…..great..hopefully tomorrow will be alright.

 

 

I woke up freakishly early to get ready, I had a very big day. By the time I had finished my shower in my on sweet bathroom the glorious daylight seeped through the blinds. It was a struggle to get to school, it seemed my negative attitude effected people, was I really that miserable? Well Mel was alright but my mum and Alex were playing hell though. I had an hour to get ready, this was my second chance. I walked to my cupboard and opened it, all I could see were daggy old clothes from last year, I needed help and I needed it fast!

 

I banged on Mel’s door as she slowly opened it. ‘What do you want’ she asked groggily rubbing sleep out of her eyes. ‘Well I have a huge favour to ask you’ I paused but she didn’t reply. ‘Could you help me with my..Clothes, hair and makeup?’Then I saw Mel’s eyes light up, she grabbed my hand and led me to her bed. She told me to stay here until she found the right clothes for me, so I did. After half an hour Mel came out with a ridiculously short skirt with a white blouse and a vest on the top of it. ‘ Well, I’ve edited the uniform but I see all the kids wearing something like this’ Mel said with a wink. I had no choice, I had to do this!  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[CharlesMonroe]

This is pretty interesting...I think you should edit the first two chapters, fix the spelling errors and add some more detail to things, it'll make it longer to, it's coming along pretty good (: