stargazing

haiku (2)

through lusterless stars ✨
in the midst of the cosmos ✨
your eyes coruscate ✨

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Nicely done. Many haikus don't seem to transmit meaning so clearly.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really like this....
even when the stars don't shine...they eyes do enough of that for both.
really nice senryu...here...
j.