Chapter ONE What am I?

This is a WOF: Work Of Fiction

   The year is 2077, the world is full of corruption. Politicians taking bribes from the local gangs, police officers stealing from the crime sceene and crime at its all time highest. The city is in a state of martial law yet the millitary sit on their asses and watch as people inocent people are exicuted in front of them. I am a guardian angle, I walk the streets and protect the people of the city, my name is Loki and if you were to look at me you would see an innocent young man with a black past not a killer. The streets aren't safe at night, but people work in the day and walk home at night. Scince the last world war in 2022 people have had to up the production of goods to stabalize the world economy after of cource. The Russians atacked the Americans the world went to war the east versus the west, I fought in the war as a sniper and infiltrator. The war ended when America droped a Nutreno bomb on Russia making it a desolate and deserted wasteland unable for humans to inhabit again.

   

    Back at home my wife Anna was worried for me as it was a war. She waited for either me or a black bordered letter. It was me that arived gladly before the letter. When I returned I found a city with a changed landscape, people were caring wounded children on streatchers and women in bags. In the war I met a bright young medic named Nathan he had a girl back home to he was waiting till he got back to propose but when we got back we found that the world had changed.

Reviews

[Meph]

This was not to be your life, Loki. You were meant for greater shores... tides that break upon you with resolve that you can only admire.

Your time will come. Steady yourself.

[Meph]

be no lesser man than where you came from. You are the providence of angels. And upon you, I seek my redemption, but only if I am worthy. Let your destiny decide for both of us... and let Hell reap between us, moreseo for me and towards that which we have sought in foolishness.

I have done my best afterall.

[mike]

Dark, ominous, tons of room to grow. Sounds like it is gonna be an awesome story, and am looking forward to reading more. By the way you do have some spelling errors in there, but overall a great start.

[Loki Gress]

Thank you, you can expect chapter 2 with in the day.

[Meph]

Promise nothing, and then give everything. :)

[Meph]

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