Haiku

Re-post.

Cascades of stone fall,

Caressing a sea of sand...

Nature sleeps tonight.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful to say the least...Thank you for sharing...:)..............

[David Michael]

You know, I always did like this form - it has a simplicity and potential power that is so attractive to a poet. You've inspired me - I think my next piece will be a haiku! (Or haiku-inspired at least. I kind of like to experiment with my own forms...)

But as to what you actually wrote ;) I really like it. It evokes both peaceful and soft feelings, while at the same time motion, nighttime rustlings and restlessness... Very evocative!

[Alex Luna]

Love how you fit this all into this tight little form

[Tomás Ó C..]

Love it...

[darkgurl]

How lovely and well wrote.....Kim

[AnwenKya]

Not a single word is wasted, it has the perfect rhythm and it flows well. The imagery is beautiful, too. Overall, a rather magnificent haiku.

[BEEGE]

Well written.

BeegE

[Wondering Mind]

A beautiful "Haiku". It's amazing how much one can say in these little jewels.

[Poeticpiers]

nicely composed