Woman

Another re-post.

Skin. Smooth, soft skin. Fingertips gliding gently, slowly... dexterous in their every movement. Long labored breaths fill the air, thick as the room becomes humid. The moistness of her body only attracts me-- entices my tingling senses into her provocative spell. Her shoulders, bare. Fragile. Her sweet scent overcomes my nostrils so delicately... the smooth body is a veritable trophy, unbothered by man or animal. Nature in its divine form. Beauty shines through her like a midnight star in a black sky, gleaming for perfection is woman. Each of her curves plagues me as I try to look away, calling out like an unexplored horizon in the hands of man, love lurking in each perfect corner of her lips. Mmmmm... oh woman... perfection is... woman.

Author's Note

This is an older piece. Please let me know if there are any mistakes, as I have not edited it. Ever. Hehe :)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

this is a sensual writing,and you talk beautifully about the gifts women are adorned with ,but off course ,since very old women are symbols of everything beautiful on this earth ,some go far to say,she is from another planet and came to inhabit earth with her friend ,the male,yes not only serene in body but even in mind she is tender less agressive and logical and bearing,and patient much more than man,i always say they give her lesser credit than she deserves,i would even advocate her taking major political role,man is all good for waging wars ,lets see a woman face in power ,lets give her a chance ,i am sure she will do much better,i am a man but sympathize a lot with women and really my convictions come from solid experience and lot of reading,i really liked this writing ,it gives me lots to think about,wonderful really

[An owl on the moon]

Beautiful and soft, moving the reader slowly, step by step... You so perfectly capture both the ancient and modern fascination with the power and beauty of a woman.

Craig