Woman

Another re-post.

Skin. Smooth, soft skin. Fingertips gliding gently, slowly... dexterous in their every movement. Long labored breaths fill the air, thick as the room becomes humid. The moistness of her body only attracts me-- entices my tingling senses into her provocative spell. Her shoulders, bare. Fragile. Her sweet scent overcomes my nostrils so delicately... the smooth body is a veritable trophy, unbothered by man or animal. Nature in its divine form. Beauty shines through her like a midnight star in a black sky, gleaming for perfection is woman. Each of her curves plagues me as I try to look away, calling out like an unexplored horizon in the hands of man, love lurking in each perfect corner of her lips. Mmmmm... oh woman... perfection is... woman.

Author's Note

This is an older piece. Please let me know if there are any mistakes, as I have not edited it. Ever. Hehe :)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

this is a sensual writing,and you talk beautifully about the gifts women are adorned with ,but off course ,since very old women are symbols of everything beautiful on this earth ,some go far to say,she is from another planet and came to inhabit earth with her friend ,the male,yes not only serene in body but even in mind she is tender less agressive and logical and bearing,and patient much more than man,i always say they give her lesser credit than she deserves,i would even advocate her taking major political role,man is all good for waging wars ,lets see a woman face in power ,lets give her a chance ,i am sure she will do much better,i am a man but sympathize a lot with women and really my convictions come from solid experience and lot of reading,i really liked this writing ,it gives me lots to think about,wonderful really

[Hotwater]

Top draw gear, sexiness doesn't come better than this, intoxicating... the poetry grabs all the senses and "screams"... "yummy"!!
*bird*

[David Michael]

The sight that wars have been fought over, that books have been written about; Gods have given up divinity and men have crossed the world, all for the strength beneath the seeming fragility, the feline power and grace that undulate her curves in a hypnotic dance of dappled shadow and moonlit skin... Very erotic, very beautiful, very divine - the greatest art in all nature, some might argue.

Great piece!

[J. Alfred Prufrock]

i must agree, a beautiful woman is a moving work of art. well done

[ransom]

Nice. Really nice.

[Kelley]

Women are like art work to our senses. This was beautifully wrote
and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Kelley

[darkgurl]

A sensual write here, like this write very well wrote....Kim

[Wondering Mind]

The universal perfection of woman's beauty wonderfully expressed.

[M_S_Lay]

I dont edit others work, as Im not very good at it. (Even on my own work lol)
All I can really speak to is whether or not I enjoyed the peice. An I must say that I did. It was sexy, sensual, love and lust all mixed and twisted together.

Nicely done

[Jane Doe]

Mmmmm absolutely, fantastically erotic. A wonderful, wonderful piece. It is going in my favs.

[jemajo]

Very sensual. No mispellings. I think you captured a very natural emotion nicely.