let us be one

First try.I am open to critics. :-) :-)

Come, come drown into my eyes,

Now go, go sinking down my soul,

Could you see through my heart? 

Know what’s tearing me apart? ............

Mmmm, Guess you feel the pain!

Just run to me, like a captive set free,

And Hold me tight, like the string to a kite,

O love me please, let the time for a moment cease,

 Baby come let us be one……………….

 

Girl you know, it's hard to breath,

You’re the oxygen I need,

Coz My life’s into amnesia,

Would you be my anesthesia,

Mmmm, and lure me to sleep.

Just run to me, like a chasing honey bee,

And Hold me tight, like the petals of poppy at night.

O love me please, let the time for a moment cease,

 Baby come let us be one……………….

:-Vishal Singh <3 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[¿]

An anastasia that overtakes the body doesn't makes it unconscious but gives the fits of love I guess!!
Great read😊

[Vishal Singh]

thank you :)

[&iquest;]

Wc😊......!!

[Tony]

Very nice first try! I like it. Keep writing!

[Vishal Singh]

Means a lot Tony. Thank you.