craving you

It’s 3:00 a.m. and I’m awake,

craving you.

I’m alone with my thoughts, and you’re in every single one..

is that at all pathetic? Obsessive?

And it’s the witching hour, it’s dark and lonely

you’re so far away.

Why are you so far away?

I’m here in my bed, wishing on a star, but there’s none to be found

In tonight’s sky

I can't see anything

So I’m wishing on the blackness engulfing everything

That you could just be,

Be here with me

it’s 3:01 a.m. and I’m awake

craving you.

Reviews

[Twizzler]

This is a perfect description of that gnawing, obsessive feeling. You set the scene so well. I love it!

[koty bell]

This was incredible writing hannah loved ur about me and really starting to dig ur writing;)

[Rachel Landes]

Love this. Totally nailed it!

[misha]

This was a good poem and I really liked the line "So I’m wishing on the blackness engulfing everything". Great job!

[The Chosen Poet]

Lol i don't know why but this piece made me smile,
''So I’m wishing on the blackness engulfing everything
That you could just be,'' This love can be baaaad haha. This is a very nice piece.

Sean

[Hannah Berry]

Hahah well I'm glad you enjoyed it, and interpreted it however you did. :)