Content

First thing i ever wrote! ___

I wrote this with a question in mind. What are the drawbacks from living life content. What are the positives and negatives or would you define the characterisitics as neutral, based on your personal interpretation of the word Content.

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To live for death, and die content
Is without a will for breathe, while you lie to vent
So with neutral control, and a grip with sense
Your body and soul, commits to hence
It Ceases to expand, and leaves a man
All alone
and in his zone
comfortable in his home.

 

Submitted on 2006-02-12 09:47:10

Reviews

[shane]

i like this, can't really elaborate, sorry man, i suck at reviews,

[Xeru]

That was some deep a*s s**t Sin. No seriously I was feeling that joint. You can visualize those words in alot of different ways simultaneously. Its got that weight of the world on your shoulders vibe tryin to balance it out with that everything is gonna be all right s**t. Beautiful short joint. Its amazing what you find and uses for your mind just comtemplating standards and how you decide to guide your own soul. Exceptional.. Especially for a first write...