Moronic Rhetoric-- Acidic Oxydation

wrote this sometime last year... the motif spills over to under lie

I got the sense of a grave digger who hates Hitler,

Early bird with a nightstick but enjoys a late dinner.

One of those types, got my eyes on the border patrol,

A USA today activist goin to sleep durin the morning they stole,

Rather then ignoring the ode that’s too boring to loathe.

This country got w****s into coach, forming the mold;

Wheres the closure? its pigments odor stains the riders belt,

My guide to hell is inside the welts put on the higher shelf.

Out of reach but next to heart, indigenous to the concept of narc,

Intrepid farce, a binomial, corroding through, a henchmen’s mark.

These ink blots paint the proof and glitz of each warning shot taken used to miss,

Side swipe the mental knots aimed in feuds with wit like Rorschach aiding fugitives

Preparation for the mass huddle, ill take a test and disrobe in the glass shuttle.

Unwrap the tier of confusion that befits the illusions of tryin to hard to act subtle.

Showing indifference with a racist blend, calm my dreams with a homeostasis trend.

In an ageless end, without betraying friends, ill live a life sickly white but make amends.

Give a forty to a mule an call it a night,
drown a jew see it through till dawn of the light,

Cuz the stranger in me, hits the light at the angle you bleed,

Mangled and neat, I like it fresh like raping an angels p***y..

Reviews

[Legion]

What a strange trip this was. Can't say I like it, but can't say I don't. You have some interesting visuals within this as well as meanings. You might consider rating this mature though (especially with that last line). Some punctuation problems but with the way this is written they could be intentional. Well done over all.

[Li Li]

That ending line was quite the smack in the face! I mean.... wow. Lol! I am over here wondering what just happened.... this was such an intense fuel of words..... at the end... they all seemed to ignite.

You really seem to be getting words in proper placement..... the bars are written well and formatted well.... you seem to have improved with this piece.... I commend you for stepping it up!

Bless!