Shadows

Is this how souls meet?

Dim light, high intensity
Dark silhouettes traced through
Your shadow crosses mine
A new axis to my rotation, I gain
Round and round, we twirl
Shapes keep changing
Two shadows become one
The coal black silhouette , from
Brightest diamond ever , born
Dim light gone
BLACK OUT IN SPACE.

Reviews

[Stonz P.]

Haha, I would have agreed with you a few years ago but my researches and experiences have proven different. But, a soul is like a shadow in many ways; even though it hurts in the physical body but remains unaffected...
And if souls were like shadows, would it stop existing in the dark?

Anways, enough of the lecture; nicely penned, I respect your opinion :)

[Namrata]

Intimidating question Sir ! But I would like to believe that shadow aka soul here would only form in a given intensity of light ( some emotion behaving as wave or particle maybe ). I like to let my thoughts run wild but then again, you respect my opinion, that is great ! Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. You create good visions and places. You used the words with skill. I like the way you led the reader to the very nice closing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Namrata]

Thank you sir.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Mayank]

whoa! I am sucker for such dark poetry. We cannot see our soul but let's say if soul just a shadow, probably this is how they meet.

[Namrata]

Glad you find it worth stopping by.

[Wandering Minstrel]

Great work, powerful and full of emotion

[Namrata]

Thank you so much. :D

[melodioh]

is this how soul's meet? I don't think so. Souls are not shadows. They are light, until they get it wrong..

[Namrata]

That would be another way because souls are shadows until you find your soul mate. Then the union gives light.

[melodioh]

not quite the way it works, sorry kiddo. you are free to believe what you will, however. so, good luck to you.

[Namrata]

And I exercise my freedom, thank you for stopping by , aunty ?

[Matching Socks]

This is a unique idea. :)
The shadows merging symbolic of two souls joining.
I really like this.

[Namrata]

Glad you do :D