Those Brave Souls.

This is a dedication to all those soldiers who have given up their lives to keep us alive. They had no reason for war. It was just "Mankind".

Darkness and night,

Bright and light,

Shining armor of the silvery knight.

 

War and bloodshed,

Led to the deaths,

Deaths of the many brave knights,

Whose lives were at stake.

 

Cried not the families,

They were as proud as they could be,

With a smile on their face,

They said goodbye to life.

 

They were innocent,

They had no such reason to fight,

Other than to save other’s lives.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Such a Honorable poem for Memorial day.


I loved these Stanza's lines.


Darkness and night,

Bright and light,

Shining armor of the silvery knight.


They were innocent,

They had no such reason to fight,

Other than to save other’s lives.




Thank you for sharing this Honorable and Brave piece.


Beautiful such Tribute to our fighting Troops.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, K. Believe me, the first 3 lines were a random thought I got when I was in school. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. I always enjoy reading your work. it's my pleasure. wow well you did an amazing Job that's how it happens we are thinking and it pops in our head :) Blessings. Kindred poet

[Simran Kewlani]

Haha. Thank you. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Those that risk there lives for family or freedom are the greatest heroes in the world. Really eloquently written.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank youu. :)

[xDalliance]

Patriotism at its best. Such strong feels :)

[Simran Kewlani]

I'm glad you're back, Jharna!

[xDalliance]

Haha me too :P

[KWP]

Love the last stanza ... I look forward to the day when humanity can learn from their lessons of the past and not keep believe that war & death is always the answer

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (:

[Sourav]

You've expressed very well and your emotion is quite evident here. But this font is really disturbing, it's a poem not graffiti after all... Anyways I liked this write of yours. :)

[Simran Kewlani]

I know, the font size got a bit messed up. I like to keep my fonts different. Thank you, anyway. (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

Very good poem there Simran.Your words are honest and heartfelt.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Vidya. I was actually worried this won't come out well. Since I haven't written one for weeks. I'm glad you liked it. (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

I liked it and it came out great hunny.You are welcome :)

[melissa]

Awesome poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (:

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Saddam]

They were innocent,
They had no such reason to fight,
Other than to save other’s lives.

Oh dear....you just brought tears in my eyes. Kya kavita likhi hai. Write that Awesome piece in hindi, jyada log isase jud payenge.

[Simran Kewlani]

I know this is weird, but my Hindi sucks. I can barely speak Hindi correctly. :P

[Saddam]

you are joking.....in biggest hindi city you are saying it is hard for you? Ok, let me try to do so.....

[Simran Kewlani]

No kidding. I am too used to English. I never bothered to widen my scope for hindi. Because I have always been bad at it. :p

[Saddam]

then you are missing sweetest language ever. Choti se choti feeling ko, aur wo sab jo hum indians bol sakte hai. Try dear.... and think about your native language.

Is that your avatar is really you?

[Penny]

Simmi are you Sindhi?

[Saddam]

haha....guess......

[Simran Kewlani]

That really is me. Yes, I am a sindi. (:

[Penny]

Ha. See I kno. Waese i hv relatives in family who are multani, quite close to sindhis, eh?

[Simran Kewlani]

Dunno. :p Sorry.

[Penny]

Its ok.....