Existence Affected.

The existence of these creatures, affect the world.

The ghosts from the paranormal world,

Blood shed and revenge and murder,

Choking them to death.

 

Unwanted they are in this world,

Sent from the paranormal world.

 

White skin covered in red and black,

Lack of feelings and tears,

Yes, they are in our world,

Sent from the paranormal world.

Author's Note

Not my best. Criticize to the most. (:

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

very Interesting there are evils that walk upon the
earth is why the devil can trick other into believing his
lies but he isn't walking the earth maybe demons.

but I believe there is good also but think about this
the way we are we will be
the same when we die so if they were
a maze murder that's what they will be in that realm
creepy but very true.

Thank you for all your kind reviews.

Nice work. blessings Kindred poet

P.S. you can use realm if you like
there is all different kinds is why
there's things floating around more
then one earth and one heaven.

I have seen my fair share of hideous
frightening things I never want to see again.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (:

[MsJewel]

Powerful and chilling!

:) Julie

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Julie. (:

[Beth]

white skin covered in red and black...reminds me of some forgotten days...great work!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Beth. (:

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:).........................

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you! (:

[Sami Khalil]

You re welcome...:)................

[Saddam]

White skin covered in red and black,
Lack of feelings and tears,
Yes, they are in our world,
Sent from the paranormal world.

Very powerful writing. Awesome, just simply great.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you SSADD! (:

[A. Amos]

Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (:

[Frieda P]

You must be talking about men...ha kidding guys! I like it Simran...needs a bit of tweaking I think...too many repeat words, that's just me of course.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (:

[yash]

I also caught the same link Frieda..

[Vidya Bacchus]

Interesting idea there Simran.Are all these evils we see sent from the paranormal realm ?

[Simran Kewlani]

Yeah. Probably. I guess so.

[Traci]

I like the dark mysterious nature of this poem. Always a fan of paranormal writes as well, and look forward to reading more of your work of art.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. This was just a simple try. (:

[melissa]

Awesome poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. I will. (:

[melissa]

Your welcome