Stars.

As bright as the stars,

As twinkling as the stars,

Are the people who are true.

 

Small and unseen they are,

But wise to be true.

 

The wars of the universe,

The bloodshed in the fights,

 

As fragile and transparent as glass is their life,

 

As deep as the black hole,

And dark as the night is their life.

 

But the stars and the moon spread their never ending light,

Making the night twinkle and brighten as the armor of the silver knight.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So Beautiful I love it.

Makes me think
of the song Twinkle
Twinkle little star you
heard that song before?


I loved these stanza's lines.



But the stars and the moon spread their never ending light,

Making the night twinkle and brighten as the armor of the silver knight.


Thank you for your lovely review and thank you for sharing. blessings. kindred poet

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you.
Yes, I have heard it.
You're most welcome, hun. (:

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome and thank you. blessings. kindred poet

[J.Nico]

Even if repeating, beautiful.
Meaningful and intense. I read each line as if an entire text...

[Simran Kewlani]

Wow. Thank you. :)

[Kalen Luciano]

Great poem and the font goes very well with it

[Passionate_yatish]

they shimmer above as a guiding soul,
helping me to crawl through the track of my goal.
i fuss around as they dazzle,
excited im to see them clearing my hassles,
the scenic beauty expresses the wellness of nature,
to understand it and to be much mature.

[Simran Kewlani]

Wow that's nicee

[Passionate_yatish]

thank you.
add me on facebook

[Simran Kewlani]

no, i dont add randoms.

[Passionate_yatish]

too rude
no need

[KittyVenus]

wise words as normal... love the font. you kinda shoved the universe in there- i think he liked that... tra la la la la la.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. LOL. Haha

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I really love this poem. Such a stunning write.

Kaze~ :-) :-D

[Simran Kewlani]

Aww thank you Kaze! (:

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

It was my pleasure reading it. ^_^

[melissa]

Amazing poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Simran Kewlani]

I will. Thank you! (:

[melissa]

Your welcome

[Frieda P]

Soft and ethereal with a strong message, nicely pen'd Simran! ;-) x

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Frieda! (:

[KWP]

This is very beautiful and immediately allows sink within the depths of forever ... nice one xx

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you KWP! (: xoxo

[Saddam]

As deep as the black hole,
And dark as the night is their life.
But the stars and the moon spread their never
ending light,
Making the night twinkle and brighten as the
armor of the silver knight.

beautifully write. Now I am looking your poetry powerful appeal. Mai to fan ho gaya. Lovely.

[Simran Kewlani]

Haha! Thank you SSADD! (: