Death Stopped For Me.

Because I could not stop for death. Death stopped for me.

Sitting still by the window sill,

I watched how death stopped by,

Silently with tippy steps walked towards me,

With its soft and gently hands,

Walked me to the ground and under,

Made me disappear forever,

Making my existence worth remembering ever.

Author's Note

Some problems at home, so couldn't upload. Sorry for the inconvenience. (:

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow, love this one…It makes me think of how we don't see so many things coming until they happen to us, especially the bad things.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Cowboy. ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are very welcome

[Abizar Bagasrawala]

This is pleasantly simple. I like :)
Check out 'Because I Could Not Stop For Death' by 'Emily Dickinson', it uses a very similiar concept. You could compare it with your writing. Might help.

[Simran Kewlani]

Let's just say, that poem is my inspiration for this poem.
That poem is one of my favourite poems in "Death" as a concept.
About the poem, I have written: "Because I could not stop for death. Death stopped for me"
I think that is a line from that poem.
And thank you. I thought no one would think about this poem. I'm glad you did. (:

[KittyVenus]

wow- for a short poem, this is really good

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Kitty. (:

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a stunning write. :-D

Kaze~

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Kaze! (:

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

It was my pleasure reading it. ^_^

[melissa]

Great poem send me more to read i love them so far

[Simran Kewlani]

I will. Thank you! (:

[melissa]

Your welcome

[Saddam]

Walked me to the ground and
under,
Made me disappear forever,
Making my existence worth
remembering ever.

Carefully write with great skill. Lovely poetry.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you SSADD! (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

An interesting write Simran.Death is a reality that we must all face sooner or later :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Vidya. Yes, that's true. (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)