Cursed Life.

Wrote this to help a friend.

Lived with the fears,

Lived with those feelings,

Killing myself every minute,

Cursing life, parents and god for the making me enter the hell like world and survive,

Survive with the cursed body and crying my life out everyday,

Not talking, not looking,

Eyes full of blood and hands of cuts,

What wrong did I do? What was my mistake?

That I had to live a life cursed forever,

With the grudges and the hatred I walked past life.

Author's Note

Love to get reviews. (:

Reviews

[Stephanie Irene]

Very nice, can definitely see the struggle;e between living and wanting to be dead.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. I'm glad you figured it out. (:

[Roger Turgeon]

I see the pain of living and yet the strength within to survive. When you can reconcile the two great things will happen.

[Simran Kewlani]

Yes. That's great. Thank you. (:

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

So much emotion, that I actually can sort of relate too. Outstanding write. :-D

Kaze~

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you Kaze. (:

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

All good. :-)

[xDalliance]

Describing the pain and sadness of living a life you're not happy with. Surviving all the cutting remarks you gonna get because of a cursed body. Amazing. Do I need to start getting jealous of your writings Simran? ;)

[Simran Kewlani]

No, I don't want you to get jealous of my writings because yours are better. (: Thank you.

[xDalliance]

Your welcome! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Pain and sadness and hopelessness speak through your words Simran :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Jack...]

Very deep and loud my friend. This speaks volumes on the subject of life and pain. Extremely cool.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you! I appreciate. (:

[Frieda P]

Lots of angst oozing from these strong words and bitter exclamations. It's an affecting read. Nice job Simran. :)

'What wrong I did?' Try 'what wrong did I do?'...flows better

[Simran Kewlani]

okay, I shall change it. Thank you.
I know you're always there to correct me. (:

[Frieda P]

I know English isn't your first language, always happy to do so if I can be of help...my pleasure :)

[Simran Kewlani]

It is my first language. Ouch! That hurt. I just wrote whatever I thought would be nice. Forgot to check it.

[Frieda P]

Oh no...now I'm in big trouble! Sorry......ha Well then be more careful missy ;-)

[Simran Kewlani]

It's okay. I will. For sure. (:

[Frieda P]

I'm keeping my big trap shut from now on ha ;-P

[Simran Kewlani]

It's okay Frieda. No worries.

[KittyVenus]

love it, thanks for getting me to see it!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you and you're welcome. (:
I'm glad you saw it.

[KittyVenus]

Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

[Simran Kewlani]

;)........