Unknown.

Hate her,

No one's asking you to date her,

She just wants a friend,

But she went wrong and got nothing other than haters,

She wanted to look pretty; so she used to cosmetics,

People laughed at her,

She wanted to look cool: so she marked her hand with big scratches,

People didn't give her the required attention yet,

10 years from now when she will be looked at,

She's gonna be a totally different person,

A person who yet doesn't talk,

Cries all day and all night,

Din't smile for a long time now,

Still marks her hand,

The only difference is that she never wants to be known,

Because hate turned her her unknown, unwanted and unfriendly.

Reviews

[Demii]

This is deep and sad, and Hate does change people, and not always for the best, sometimes people hate something so much that they feel theres nothing better to do then just hate everything around them because they don't know what else to do, and can't do what they want to do, good job!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. I appreciate this comment.

[The Mysterious Guy]

Damn, This is too damn deep..

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This is a very deepening and sad poem. I love this poem, nicely written.

Kaze~ :-D

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank youu. (:

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[KittyVenus]

Beautifully deep, this is beautiful!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you! (:

[KittyVenus]

yay! your welcome! XD

[Vidya Bacchus]

Try as we may we are never going to be able to please people so we should strive to please ourselves :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (: Yes, we should.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :