Distant Love

to the one i love far away

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I love you with all my heart

Even though we are far apart

The future cannot be forseen

But I still hold on to this dream

To see you and hold you tight

I will fight through any plight

For I love you with all my heart

And wish we were not far apart

Author's Note

i removed endless that was before dream cause it messed up the cadence

Reviews

[Scarlet Letter]

Very cute poem. I can relate to this because my relationship has always been long distance and it is hard, but it is possible to grow in love through disntance. Well done.

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

cute and very promising.
the rhyming and rhythm seems very smooth and babyish.
though i enjoyed having it read slowly and emotionally.

[Carli]

O.o really sweet :) I love it!

[msharma]

an optimistic note