Teardrops of Society

My First Poem. Please give me feedback:) Thanks.

In a perfect society

There is no tribulation

No man standing over you

Beating you down with his lips

The profanity of outputting spirits

The sanctity of clinging to what is close

When all you have is the shoes on your feet and

The thin tee shirt on your backside. Would your

Eyes see more for the blind. Or would judgment

Triumph?

If you chewed your own words would you rue the day and spit them out?

Or would you taste the bittersweet phrases and feel your demons strengthen you

Slowly eating away all that you have left at a chance to make it to the other side.

And now that you have nothing left. You are so consumed with your greed and sick

Scotch reeking lust. You are so arrogant and naïve to the fact that you are only fooling your self

God know what you have done and only he will suffice rightful justice. I have found comfort in the

Peace and deep relationship with the Creator of you and I and all.  You have made me find the true meaning of life. My love for creatures and the

Beauty of swaying trees making love to the wind. I enjoy the silence of a summer day and the sand I

Can squeeze between my fingertips. I enjoy the perfection of the clouds and how they look down on me in love

And they how they shower me in their love and rain down there tears....

Author's Note

This is My first poem that I have allowed people to read so constructive criticism would be mindful. Thanks:)