Try

I try so hard to stay in my lane,
While I'm driving down the road.
But you only yell and lecture me,
It's not funny though.
I never burn the food,
That I serve you for dinner.
But you still won't eat it,
Will I never be a winner?
I cry at night because of you,
Because you really just can't see.
The ways I try so hard for you,
But you just never see me.
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I get all A's in school for you,
So maybe you'll be proud.
But all I hear is you playing with him,
Gee, you laugh so loud.
I made college plans,
I'll graduate early too.
But did you ever notice that?
No you passed right by that too.

Reviews

[TTBoy28]

I definitely feel your talent for conversation, Nae Nae! You truly make me feel that you are writing from the heart. "Try" is my underdog piece of writing from you! Fantastic job!

[Michael X]

you have a golden flow going here nae nae, i mean the words are intently convincing and convicting and well rounded, smooth and its easy for
the reader to grasp the sincere passion that envelops the soft images,
its spoken emotional context is tranquil yet touching in heartbreaking
feature of ponder, what has made the implications of not being good
enough just as a perfect theme should follow through,
you've done an amazing job here.

[Nae Nae]

This was just random, it really doesn't have a story or anything behind it.