The Hurt of Love

I didn't know how much it would hurt

   The day I drove to your house

I never thought the pain would last

   When I told you I gave up.

I could never have believed in a million years

   I would want you back in my life

To hold me closer than ever

   When I told you "No I can't take you back"

I never thought I would change positions with you.

 

Now I lay in bed every night and I close my eyes

I remember the times I spent with you

The nights I spent curled up in your arms.

The afternoons I spent crying on your shoulder.

I let the tears slowly fall down my face as I reminisque.

I silently scream into nobody's arms as I feel the hurt of my love

I've ruined my life and I hope I can fix it

But without you here how can I do that?

 

 

Author's Note

I'm having a rough time ...A new love ...An old love ...A broken heart for both ...

Reviews

[Big ol' Kahuna]

An emotional good write. We all have probably felt this at some point in our life. It's a good thing that things always get better, sooner or later.

good job

[Eagle Cruagh]

"This is so confusing for review because,

'We all have this problem. You are a unique and
interesting individual, but your situation, your feeling
of loss and lonliness is pretty normal. Actually I am
going through much the same at this moment.

Feelings, emotions aside, you are a gifted writer.
Your writing flows smoothly, is well constructed and
very interesting.

By all means continue the writing and connect with
other writers.

My rating ----- 100 %

-----Eagle Cruagh

[Free Writer]

I'm sorry about your hard time, but the words in your writing are very powerful and meaningful. I can feel your pain, maybe even not as much as I may think, but I can still feel for you and understand in some way.

[BABSIE BEE]

You'll manage...believe me. You'll look back and wonder what all the fuss was about. You won't believe that...but you will. Great poem full of loss pain and love. It is a wonderful thing to be loved..and looks like you sure were and are and always will be...whether it be by this same person or not. Thanks for sharing
BBXX

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. deeply moving and sad rhythm and message.. love is so painful at times. I could feel this immensely.. I 've known that struggle.. in the same situtation sort of.. hurt by the present and past.. I want to run away and just throw the towel in at times. It can be such a tiring plight.. a worthy one they say.. I ponder that view sometimes. This one could have been written by my very own heart.. it's so similar.. I am sure others will relate as well.. Love is a great high of Euphoria in the beginning that always follows with some sort of low.. when it levels out or crashes.. with reality... great flow of emotions and honesty! =)

[Doctor JKC]

Another rant but done well.