What Do I Do Next?

I'm sitting on a swing

As you push me back and forth.

I feel the wind blow threw my hair,

And I smile a great grin.

I lay here in your arms,

As I rest in my sanctuary.

I feel the warmth of your touch,

Relief runs down my face.

I lean my head upon your shoulder

As these tears fall down my face

You listen to all the sad things I say

You are there to hear my words.

Now I sit here on a rock,

At the edge of the sea.

I watch the sun slowly set

But you are not with me.

A single tear falls down my cheek

As I stare into the sea.

I regret the things that I've told to you

For I fear that you should know.

I sit alone forever more

With just you on my mind

Wishing that I never said the awful things

That made you leave my side.

Now NOTHING is the same ...

Author's Note

Please ...If you have negative criticism, give it to me nicely.

Reviews

[Andrian D]

Ouch. The feelings of hurt and betrayal come through loud and clear. I can't comment on the form or meter of the piece as I'm not that fluent in those aspects of poetry.