Crying Eyes

First they begin to shimmer,

A new light that was never seen.

Then they well with water,

Leave them with a new sheen.

After that water drips down the underlashes,

Finally dripping down the skin beneath them.

On my dry skin, a wet line is left.

Tickling all the way as it runs down my cheeks.

Dark spots begin to expand on my shirt,

As the drops fall off my chin.

Reviews

[Michael Lopez]

that was really good..nice imagery u have here...

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Now that is a great description of falling tears! I enjoyed it.